||[Apr. 13th, 2008|11:32 pm]
Editing accomplished for tonight -- I'm just doing a first pass over it, noting contradictions, points that need clarification, etc. That said, the first pass is over 50% complete.
...and Cal's mother has been called "Alice", "Minerva", and "Lisa" (which collides with another character's name) over the course of the past 50-75 pages.
~sheepish~ Heh, heh, heh... heh... heh...