||[Oct. 13th, 2005|09:32 am]
785 words, and I'm trying very hard to turn off my internal editor.
I finally found a good word for "spells" - "renders". It's jargony and I will need to explain its source (in non-computer-geeks-only terms), but it fits with the story. Boy, I can smell the scent of editing all ready. I've changed a lot about the magic system, but it will, more or less, not change anything so far in the story. The basic concept was solid, I just needed to flesh some things out beyond "magic with computers! Yay!"